Day 73 回答例

わたしの回答

【2】 置き換え エクササイズ（日本語文）
1)　わたしたちの計画は完璧だと思ったが、彼は弱点を指摘した。計画をもう一度検討しなければいけなかったので、正直そういうことはしたくなかった。しかし、チームに彼のようなすばらしいひとがいることをありがたいと思った。
2)先月、彼女とその彼氏に会ったとき、とても幸福そうだった。だから彼女が彼氏と別れたことを聞いてびっくりした。彼女はわたしに、先月あったときは、すでに彼らの関係はひどくて、幸せそうなふりをしていたとおしえてくれた。
【3】 置き換え エクササイズ（英文）
1) I thought our plan was perfect, but he pointed out the weak point. So we had to consider our plan again. To be honest, I don’t want to do that. But I was also grateful for such a great person like him in our team.
2) When I saw her and her boyfriend last month, they looked very happy. So I was very surprised to hear that she broke up with him. She told me that their relationship was already terrible and they pretended to look happy.
【4】 Communication Skill Exercise（英文）
Your Questions:
1) Do you think what it is too strict among Japanese rules?
2) If you feel some of them are too strict for you, what will you do?
3) Do you think students shouldn’t be forced to follow such strict rules?

回答例

1)　　I thought our plan was perfect, but he pointed out a problem that no one would normally notice. I was so upset that we had to rethink the plan, but at the same time, I’m thankful to have a brain like his on the team.

2)　　I was so surprised to hear that my friend broke up with her boyfriend because they looked happy when I saw them last month. But my friend told me that their relationship was already at a point where it couldn’t be fixed by then and they were only pretending to be happy.

フィードバック

I don’t want to do that
⇒ 細かくなりますが I didn’t want to do that とすると、更に自然に繋がりますね！
I was also grateful for such a great person like him in our team
⇒ こちらも細かいですが grateful to have such a… とすると、自然になります ^^

３文目、「その頃には」が溢れてしまったので、加えて表現してみましょう☆

What do you think is too strict among Japanese rules? とすると自然になります ^^

⇒ Fabio が「 日本のルールがとても厳しい」と感じている事が既に分かっているので、
When you feel some of them are too strict for you, what do you usually do?
のように質問すると、自然かもしれません ^^
I guess there is nothing you can do, especially at school!

【音声について】
2:04     make a difference to the world のイントネーションが素晴らしかったです！　Beautiful!    
4:05     courage は「カァーリィヂュ」のようなイメージで発音されると、近づきます ^^
6:04    He will は He’ll と発話すると、更にナチュラルになります ^^
8:22     I didn’t want to do that が、感情が込められ素晴らしい発話でした☆